Can you describe whats happening in this picture in the comments section: (remember a caption is a short sentence but it must be filled with important information eg. what? when? where? why? who?
Extra: See if you can find some info on this picture. eg. Where was it taken? What is that building? or anything that you find interesting...
Boom!!! mount ruapehu has just erupted we need to stay calm.In second thought run!!- from Ben
ReplyDeleteboom! mount ruapehu has just erupted we need to stay calm I can tell that it is erupting because the black and white smoke is rocketing out.
ReplyDeleteWow Ben, great verbs! I like how you edited it. Don't forget Mount Ruapehu is a proper noun = capitals. That sounds like a great story starter too
ReplyDeleteHi mr.Daliy-Jorgi
DeleteWe should write about it sometime-Jorgi
ReplyDeleteAhhhhh! Run run as fast as I can. Don't look back, never gonna look back... JUST RUN!!
ReplyDeleteFaster then your eyes the volcano explads,run! i kept saying.
ReplyDeleteAs i never look back i manag to out run the huge explotion.
-Sahar
Sorry for the spelling mr Daily-sahar
DeleteDon't worry Sahar, great effort! I do like your exciting verbs. Remember your speech marks though when someone is talking.
ReplyDeleteAhhhhh mount Rupehu just erupted run for your life!!!!!
ReplyDeleteOk
ReplyDeletewhat do you mean run
DeleteRun fast and lose your house just run and never stop ever and ever
ReplyDeletecool storys guys
ReplyDeleteThanks Ryan
ReplyDeleteeveryones wellcome
DeleteWhat a story Jorgi
ReplyDeleteThanks Ruby
ReplyDeleteThe Chatue is doomed.
ReplyDeletescary no snowing that winter
ReplyDeleteThere was a volcano that erupted.At winter that is CRAZY!!!!!
ReplyDeletefreaky scary AMAZING
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